Overall Comments

Thanks for submitting your ‘Critical Review’ Nick, which I thought was an interesting synopsis on the life of Ansel Adams.

The key issues I mentioned within my last feedback report were as follows:

•Try to attempt to redress the balance of theory to practice

•Consider and comment upon the colour infra-red work of contemporary practitioners Richard Mosse.

•Seek out and comment upon the works of Alvin Langdon Coburn / Edward Chambre-Hardman / Carleton E. Watkins / Mark Klett

This critical review certainly tries to redress the balance of your studies in relation to theory and practice, but I couldn’t really find much else in terms of the other feedback points (practitioner’s research) suggested via the last report.

Feedback on assignment

Please see the detailed specific feedback included in your Word.doc, which has been sent back along with this report.

Learning Logs/Critical essays

I’m not sure if I have the most recent link for this as it doesn’t seem to have been posted on for some time now.

Suggested reading/viewing

I’m looking forward to your last assignment now Nick and perhaps a chat to discuss the specific assessment submission requirements nearer the time.  Let me know what you have in mind for Assignment 5 anyway via email if possible.